Before Sentence
Emotional intelligence is important on a team because it allows people of different backgrounds to understand each other better to prevent future conflicts. It is also an important aspect in a team because it is important to meet your patience on an emotional level to be able to help them more efficiently.
After Sentence
Emotional intelligence is an important method that team should use to better collaborate with each other. It allows the team member to have a better understanding of one another and also helps build empathy with each other.
What pattern helped me revise this is the use of less description when I write about emotional intelligence. Being more elaborate with my explanation helped me explained my information more efficiently.
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