Saturday, October 15, 2016

Play with Sentence Variety and Style

Original

Other cases that infographics are use is to bring awareness to everyday problems. This does not limit to the problems of kids being abused but also could help bring awareness to other problems. Some of these can be problems with intimate violence. Showing the reality in which people lives are going through can help them find people to help them. Getting the resource needed to be able to get a life better for themselves is an ultimate goal for social workers. Sometimes they do not want to get the help but knowing the fact that their are people out there to provide any sort of help can be beneficial. Using infographics with different types of resources that are available and present it in a way that will give these people hopes is helping to make the world a better place.


Revised
Other ways in which infographics are use is to bring awareness to the community. This helps extend the awareness to more variety of complications. When a whole community get involve many people that are having a difficult time can get the resource needed with this type ofinformation is spread throughout the community. Some people do not have access to the help they need and other times do not want to get the help they need. Having a community in which they are welcome in open arms helps build a better life for any individual in need. With the use of infographs able to be used in a variety a ways really shows how strong it can be in the social work field.

What I like about the new sentences is that I ellaborated more on where the everyday problems can take place than just saying everyday problems. Typing about the community is a great aspect of what a social worker works with and changing it in this way is what I like most.

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